My Eyes
Sadness prevails in my eye
An unseen pain eats me alive
Tears don’t flow
But the feeling still stands by
The dryness in my eyes
Awaits a twinkle within
But it fails to appear in my eye
As no joy it finds in my life
The smile seem to have vanished
Like a horizon it seems in the distance
Don’t know whether it will ever reach my lips
I don’t know the smile who has banished
A lost kingdom of myself I rule
A lonely battle I have fought
But on my past I won’t drool
For only pain it has bought
A new kingdom I will create
Maybe a smile I will conquer
For despair I won’t wait
But a new dawn I will wait.
Labels: poems
33 Comments:
me the first
sadness filled poem but the last para shows the hope within you...good...if you are sad add me in Gtalk (legolus.shadowfax@gmail.com)... I will free you from your sorrows (not by joking but by giving you more depressions and ensure that you kill yourself soon- there 19 cases of abatement to suicide is on me - I m the Depressionist)
@ Lancelot: Congrats on being first. I think i wrote my poems looking at objects and not at any particular feelings.Besides its a really old one.
I dont think i am depressed but have the amazing capability of making others depressed. Hidden talent you see... Thanks for the help, we can plan schemes on making others sad, what say
nice idea...THE DEPRESSIONISTS consult us for getting depressed...
@ Lancelot: Our Slogan - for an alternate experience, very different from any happiness you ever experienced.
good...so lets come to an agreement indirectly by suggesting logo u made me the CEO and you are the GM (because the upper level posts never do such things :P)... so the share between us from the profits will be 75% fo rme and 25% for you...
@ lancelot: I am ok for the 75/25 % split, but first 'SHOW ME THE MONEY'. Provide the capital inflow to support your claim of 75%,I talk only in Thousand Pounds. We can then take this business proposal to the next level. (Can't help it, i am an accountant)
@ LV
I can show u the money...i have put an equivalent of 1000pounds in Swiss bank (amount in EUROS)...I will give you the account name and no u can make a trip there and check it yourself... (can't help it I am a lawyer :P)
@ Lancelot: Unfortunately I deal only in Indian Rupess as I am working out of the Indian Soil. Intend to make it a valid business proposal with the prior approval from Government of India. So no Swiss account, if you have one in Tamil nadu, I can check that personally
@ LV
make up ya mind are u within India or Outside India?if ur working out of the Indian soil- why u deal with Indian rupees??? and I offered you Euros as you asked in Pounds...anyways if you want to check the money in Tamil Nadu so be it...
Please go to RBI at Chennai and ask for the Governor's locker - I have kept an yellow bag full of currency in there you can see it youself...
@ Lancelot: Yellow bag wont do, mail me your statements with valid proof that you have the money, maybe then I will consider.
cannot mail you as they are highly P & C... you better fly to singapore to check it yourself...i can run my company on my own if you don't like the proposal...then it will be only one depressionist in this world...
as you were the one who came with the suggestion //Thanks for the help, we can plan schemes on making others sad, what say// so think twice :P
Some people i tell you what attitude they throw. You can start your company in Singapore while I will start mine in India
he he he you thats why SEN called that some people as a person who resembles the attitude of Pierce Brosnan...and If I am to stat a business I will do it world wide in which case, I will give you a run...
I doubt it, i think i can boast of having a very good business acumen. Maybe i will give you a run, never know how the tables can turn
Love how you ended the piece with hope and enthusiasm.
I've been searching for poets here..I'm so glad I found you.I think I'm gonna fave you.
Write on
@ Knee: Thanks for the comment
someone said the otehr is attitude struck :P :P :P...no problem with you turning the table I always play under the table so turning it over will not affect even my shadow :P :P :P (Bollywood punch dialogue)
@ LV... have mercy on me and write some cheerful and happy poem for a change :)
Just kidding ya...
Nice one... loved the play of words and the hope in the end :)
@ Sen: Thanks dear
@ Lancelot: In Bollywood style the good always wins and that's me. So as a villian u will lose :P
@ LV
You dialogue, "Mera pass gaadi hein, bungalow hein, bank balance hein aur aap kaa pass kiya hein??
My dialogue, "Mera pass MAA hein"
though in this movie u look like Hero (as in good) and I look like Villain (as in bad), I killed you at the end...so I will always win :P
@ Lancelot: I will be born again to take my revenge (Karz style) and then the villian will have no chance
mera pass god ki blessings hein :P and i am immortal..
i doubt it, u self proclaimmed immortal ghost
oops at is out of the bag...yes i am deathless ghost :P
@ Lancelot: finally u agreed that u r the ghost ooooooooooooooooooooooo
wats there to agree its universal truth.. :P
and i guess u r one too...or are u the fake ghost???
Fake Fake...
Hence your case is dismissed with costs to the real ghost....
@ lancelot: I will re-appeal and win the case like a true hero (hehahaha)
sorry ya case has already reached the court of appeal- so no other go other than paying the fine shall i send u my Swiss Account no?? will u be pleased to send me the fine money??
I will not agree to any of your court, I think we should take a vote. thats true justice...
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