Sunday, 15 February 2009

My Eyes

Sadness prevails in my eye

An unseen pain eats me alive

Tears don’t flow

But the feeling still stands by


The dryness in my eyes

Awaits a twinkle within

But it fails to appear in my eye

As no joy it finds in my life


The smile seem to have vanished

Like a horizon it seems in the distance

Don’t know whether it will ever reach my lips

I don’t know the smile who has banished


A lost kingdom of myself I rule

A lonely battle I have fought

But on my past I won’t drool

For only pain it has bought


A new kingdom I will create

Maybe a smile I will conquer

For despair I won’t wait

But a new dawn I will wait.

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33 Comments:

Blogger Lancelot said...

me the first

15 February 2009 at 20:18  
Blogger Lancelot said...

sadness filled poem but the last para shows the hope within you...good...if you are sad add me in Gtalk (legolus.shadowfax@gmail.com)... I will free you from your sorrows (not by joking but by giving you more depressions and ensure that you kill yourself soon- there 19 cases of abatement to suicide is on me - I m the Depressionist)

15 February 2009 at 20:21  
Blogger LV said...

@ Lancelot: Congrats on being first. I think i wrote my poems looking at objects and not at any particular feelings.Besides its a really old one.
I dont think i am depressed but have the amazing capability of making others depressed. Hidden talent you see... Thanks for the help, we can plan schemes on making others sad, what say

16 February 2009 at 00:33  
Blogger Lancelot said...

nice idea...THE DEPRESSIONISTS consult us for getting depressed...

16 February 2009 at 00:34  
Blogger LV said...

@ Lancelot: Our Slogan - for an alternate experience, very different from any happiness you ever experienced.

16 February 2009 at 01:41  
Blogger Lancelot said...

good...so lets come to an agreement indirectly by suggesting logo u made me the CEO and you are the GM (because the upper level posts never do such things :P)... so the share between us from the profits will be 75% fo rme and 25% for you...

16 February 2009 at 01:43  
Blogger LV said...

@ lancelot: I am ok for the 75/25 % split, but first 'SHOW ME THE MONEY'. Provide the capital inflow to support your claim of 75%,I talk only in Thousand Pounds. We can then take this business proposal to the next level. (Can't help it, i am an accountant)

16 February 2009 at 05:16  
Blogger Lancelot said...

@ LV

I can show u the money...i have put an equivalent of 1000pounds in Swiss bank (amount in EUROS)...I will give you the account name and no u can make a trip there and check it yourself... (can't help it I am a lawyer :P)

16 February 2009 at 05:30  
Blogger LV said...

@ Lancelot: Unfortunately I deal only in Indian Rupess as I am working out of the Indian Soil. Intend to make it a valid business proposal with the prior approval from Government of India. So no Swiss account, if you have one in Tamil nadu, I can check that personally

16 February 2009 at 08:26  
Blogger Lancelot said...

@ LV

make up ya mind are u within India or Outside India?if ur working out of the Indian soil- why u deal with Indian rupees??? and I offered you Euros as you asked in Pounds...anyways if you want to check the money in Tamil Nadu so be it...

Please go to RBI at Chennai and ask for the Governor's locker - I have kept an yellow bag full of currency in there you can see it youself...

16 February 2009 at 15:28  
Blogger LV said...

@ Lancelot: Yellow bag wont do, mail me your statements with valid proof that you have the money, maybe then I will consider.

16 February 2009 at 23:59  
Blogger Lancelot said...

cannot mail you as they are highly P & C... you better fly to singapore to check it yourself...i can run my company on my own if you don't like the proposal...then it will be only one depressionist in this world...

as you were the one who came with the suggestion //Thanks for the help, we can plan schemes on making others sad, what say// so think twice :P

17 February 2009 at 00:29  
Blogger LV said...

Some people i tell you what attitude they throw. You can start your company in Singapore while I will start mine in India

17 February 2009 at 00:55  
Blogger Lancelot said...

he he he you thats why SEN called that some people as a person who resembles the attitude of Pierce Brosnan...and If I am to stat a business I will do it world wide in which case, I will give you a run...

17 February 2009 at 00:58  
Blogger LV said...

I doubt it, i think i can boast of having a very good business acumen. Maybe i will give you a run, never know how the tables can turn

17 February 2009 at 03:21  
Blogger Knee said...

Love how you ended the piece with hope and enthusiasm.
I've been searching for poets here..I'm so glad I found you.I think I'm gonna fave you.

Write on

17 February 2009 at 07:56  
Blogger LV said...

@ Knee: Thanks for the comment

17 February 2009 at 08:43  
Blogger Lancelot said...

someone said the otehr is attitude struck :P :P :P...no problem with you turning the table I always play under the table so turning it over will not affect even my shadow :P :P :P (Bollywood punch dialogue)

17 February 2009 at 17:13  
Blogger Senorita said...

@ LV... have mercy on me and write some cheerful and happy poem for a change :)

Just kidding ya...

Nice one... loved the play of words and the hope in the end :)

17 February 2009 at 21:25  
Blogger LV said...

@ Sen: Thanks dear

@ Lancelot: In Bollywood style the good always wins and that's me. So as a villian u will lose :P

18 February 2009 at 00:05  
Blogger Lancelot said...

@ LV

You dialogue, "Mera pass gaadi hein, bungalow hein, bank balance hein aur aap kaa pass kiya hein??

My dialogue, "Mera pass MAA hein"

though in this movie u look like Hero (as in good) and I look like Villain (as in bad), I killed you at the end...so I will always win :P

19 February 2009 at 01:46  
Blogger LV said...

@ Lancelot: I will be born again to take my revenge (Karz style) and then the villian will have no chance

19 February 2009 at 23:39  
Blogger Lancelot said...

mera pass god ki blessings hein :P and i am immortal..

19 February 2009 at 23:41  
Blogger LV said...

i doubt it, u self proclaimmed immortal ghost

20 February 2009 at 01:31  
Blogger Lancelot said...

oops at is out of the bag...yes i am deathless ghost :P

20 February 2009 at 01:34  
Blogger LV said...

@ Lancelot: finally u agreed that u r the ghost ooooooooooooooooooooooo

20 February 2009 at 02:51  
Blogger Lancelot said...

wats there to agree its universal truth.. :P

22 February 2009 at 15:18  
Blogger Lancelot said...

and i guess u r one too...or are u the fake ghost???

22 February 2009 at 15:23  
Blogger LV said...

Fake Fake...

23 February 2009 at 07:34  
Blogger Lancelot said...

Hence your case is dismissed with costs to the real ghost....

23 February 2009 at 15:50  
Blogger LV said...

@ lancelot: I will re-appeal and win the case like a true hero (hehahaha)

24 February 2009 at 02:40  
Blogger Lancelot said...

sorry ya case has already reached the court of appeal- so no other go other than paying the fine shall i send u my Swiss Account no?? will u be pleased to send me the fine money??

24 February 2009 at 06:56  
Blogger LV said...

I will not agree to any of your court, I think we should take a vote. thats true justice...

25 February 2009 at 08:13  

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